Presenting,i was ,at the top of my throat
shouting out a point,with endeavor,i was...
then came a voice,clear as crystal
stung deep within,in that moment i was queer
her sound was so different,
i had never heard something like that before
her pitch was so strong,
i had never felt something like that before
her tone was so lit,
i had never seen something like that before
her eyes were so shimmering
i could never see any thing after that anymore
she stood up with a panache
and i just fell forever
she smiled at my remark
and i just stood queered
she spoke like a nightingale
her melody all but pale
i just seem to savor that from life till death
not knowing she'd be my reason to them
ever since id always steal an eye
to gaze in those mesmerizing eyes.....
her eyes were her best
so deep they went,till date i haven't reached their end
her face was small
but all features intact
her hair not long
all brown and worned out
her forehead ended quickly
for her eyes needed all there be
her nose like a vase
started and spread out at the base
her cheeks so red
you would think she'd be blushing
well all she was, a little feverish....
i stood there and kept looking at her
nor knowing for what ,neither would it ever be clear...
something there unheard happened
unaware we would be for each other...
till date i look back at that special encounter
i smile,i laugh, i cry and ponder...
charming,serene,magical,..i fall short of words,
cause none seem to describe that moment of love...
my whole world seems to start from that very instant
no big bang it was,just an interruption in course...
even today i sit here and wonder
why she stood up and said a hi...
there seemed so much more,since ages
i feel she knew ,i knew her, yet had never seen...
i cant believe my luck,to have gotten her at last
cant believe my love,to have been fulfilled so vast...
that was it the moment of revelation
the moment i see my love of life
the moment i speak ,'the first' ,to the love of my life....

shouting out a point,with endeavor,i was...
then came a voice,clear as crystal
stung deep within,in that moment i was queer
her sound was so different,
i had never heard something like that before
her pitch was so strong,
i had never felt something like that before
her tone was so lit,
i had never seen something like that before
her eyes were so shimmering
i could never see any thing after that anymore
she stood up with a panache
and i just fell forever
she smiled at my remark
and i just stood queered
she spoke like a nightingale
her melody all but pale
i just seem to savor that from life till death
not knowing she'd be my reason to them
ever since id always steal an eye
to gaze in those mesmerizing eyes.....
her eyes were her best
so deep they went,till date i haven't reached their end
her face was small
but all features intact
her hair not long
all brown and worned out
her forehead ended quickly
for her eyes needed all there be
her nose like a vase
started and spread out at the base
her cheeks so red
you would think she'd be blushing
well all she was, a little feverish....
i stood there and kept looking at her
nor knowing for what ,neither would it ever be clear...
something there unheard happened
unaware we would be for each other...
till date i look back at that special encounter
i smile,i laugh, i cry and ponder...
charming,serene,magical,..i fall short of words,
cause none seem to describe that moment of love...
my whole world seems to start from that very instant
no big bang it was,just an interruption in course...
even today i sit here and wonder
why she stood up and said a hi...
there seemed so much more,since ages
i feel she knew ,i knew her, yet had never seen...
i cant believe my luck,to have gotten her at last
cant believe my love,to have been fulfilled so vast...
that was it the moment of revelation
the moment i see my love of life
the moment i speak ,'the first' ,to the love of my life....

nice one dude!
ReplyDeleteur feelings are crystal clear in this one yaar..
thats quite unlike u
BUT its really a good one!!
keep it up!
:D
dude ... :D ... poems didnt make things go my way ... maybe ur luckier ... :) ... i loved this poem ... man ... we all feel the same way dont we ??
ReplyDeleteits the things around that inspire me to such poems.......ill try ur thing...write a poem and see if it happens.....thatll be cool.....thank u for liking it
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